Now that my first draft has been completed, I can analyse it and see what I need to improve on. The first thing that stands out on the website is that none of the photos used were my own. My chosen subject, basketball, proves difficult to take your own pictures for, however I still need to use my own photographs in order to follow the criteria. An idea that was suggested to me was to replace the picture of the balloons and redo that myself, adding different colour balloons lined up with a clear mise en scene and then later editing the picture, adding each letter of 'welcome' onto each separate balloon.
